Follow Hemingway’s lead
September 9, 2010 by Chris
Filed under Writing skills
Is simplicity is the soul of language, Hemingway was its personification. At a time when the who’s who of the writing world chose to embrace a more complex, artful style of writing Hemingway was the sole person to eschew all such obfuscation and write in a language that was simple and clear to understand. But how can Hemingway help your blog, or your business need? There are several lessons to be learnt from Ernest, and here are a handful of them.
Keep it short
Hemingway was minimalist before anyone deemed it fashionable. He looked down upon the complex writing style of others and cut out everything flowery and unnecessary. To Hemingway, it was all about penning short, powerful prose that caught the eye and captured the mind. Challenge yourself to write less and less about something until you can distil it its essence into nothing more than a sentence. Hemingway demonstrated this when challenged to tell a story in six words and he came up with “For sale: Baby shoes, never used.”
That in itself is a subtle, brilliant and sublime use of terse prose.

Use a crisp opening paragraph
Refer to the first paragraph of this post and note how it is short in length. Hemingway used to concentrate the power of his prose into a short burst right at the beginning. This acted as a prelude to the main course for Hemingway who would then continue to build on the simplicity of the storyline and wrap an entire plot and sub-contexts around it. But the key always was to use a crisp opening paragraph that got the reader on the same page as Hemingway.
Be passionate
Hemingway had a way of infusing vigor and passion into his prose. Sample this verse from ‘Old man and the Sea.’
“He was a very big Mako shark, built to swim as fast as the fastest fish in the sea and everything about him was beautiful except his jaws. His back was as blue as a sword fish’s and his belly was silver and his hide was smooth and handsome. He was built as a swordfish except for his huge jaws, which were tight shut now as he swam fast, just under the surface with his high dorsal fin knifing through the water without wavering.”
The focus and intention of Hemingway’s mind is unwavering and unambiguous and what shines through is his vision and passion for prose.
Stay positive
This is all a bit ironic as Hemingway himself had a blackness in him, but we are not talking about negativity versus positivity in a human sense. We merely refer to saying something positively versus saying something negatively. If your dentist were to tell you “this will be painless” what remains with you is the word pain, not painless. So use positive words, such as economical for inexpensive or stable instead of error-free.












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